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    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    when i get up...
    and i roll on out of bed,
    pick myself up off the floor...
    I look around
    and i wonder
    when exactly i will get to the mess that continues to surrond me

    i see pop bottles
    paper napkins
    and a can of sprite
    but all i do is pick up some pair of jeans
    and i pull them on
    doesnt matter that they havent been washed in weeks. ewww!

    and i know just how disgusting i live
    but it's no skin off my old back
    and i know how i need a new mattress
    because my old back seems to be always cracking
    oh the pain, oh the pain, oh the pain of it all....
    to much to think about,
    i think i'll have a beer
    i have no job to do today
    infact i havent had a job in years..
    so what my excuse is for keeping my place such a mess?
    jeesh i just havent a fucking clue
    maybe it's because i'm a stubborn, rotten old man,
    and i hate pretty much all of you...

    yeah yeah yeah! yeah yeah yeah!
    i'll mash my plastic dentures at you!
    yeah yeah yeah! yeah yeah yeah!
    now what you planning on doin'?


    lol:sign_weirdthread:

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    lasher Member

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    Hey now blood,

    That old dude hates the world!!
    This was a good read - I liked mucho........
    Luv the dentures bit, nice.......


    Posted By lasher | Oct 17, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Bizar Blood,
    Sounds a little like my daughter's room, and my brother when he was around long time back. Jeesh at least you have a room. You could be a homeless pushing a shopping cart.


    Posted By JolieH | Oct 17, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Hey Phil,

    Yup..that old man is full of hate! But he had a roof over his head and rolled out of a bed...interesting read!

    PD :)

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    You describe the spitting image of my grandfather.
    haha thanks for laughs and memories.

    (PS.. its always the Genius who refuse to organize)


    Posted By Smiley24_7 | Oct 21, 2007
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