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    On Valentines Day
    Come on along
    And sail with me
    I'll sing a song
    You'll make me laugh
    And we'll get high
    Watching in silence
    As seagulls fly
    We'll make love
    In the winter sun
    For countless hours
    We'll be as one
    When we no longer
    Wish to roam
    We'll turn around
    And sail back home


    Posted By skywatcher | Nov 3, 2006
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    I really like this a lot. It's got a sweet fantasy element to it that I like.


    Posted By BaliDoll | Nov 3, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Indeed - the fantasy element is there ---> Making love in the winter sun - that's just a beautiful line.

    I enjoyed reading this one very much SKYWATCHER! Thanx for sharing it with us!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 3, 2006
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    Thanks

    I really appreciate the compliments. You know how writers thrive on it. I'll just bask in the glow for a while....lol. All kidding aside, it means a lot to hear something positive. So thanks Molly and Jacquii


    Posted By skywatcher | Nov 4, 2006
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