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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    What if I told love lives deep within my heart for you.
    Would you feel happy,and run round in circles?
    Would you call me everyday to tell why you feel this way?

    So I would know, our love would be more than just a kiss.
    Show me where your love is.
    Even if it takes one week.
    Show me you really care.
    I will wait the seven days.
    Show your love lives there.
    For I am confused and dazed.
    But I will continue counting days.......
    only for one week.
    What if I died from a broken heart last night?
    Would you feel sad,and walk around in circles.
    Would you try to call me in the morning to say"I'm sorry?"
    I'd wish you'd think about these things.
    Alone with that kiss on my cheek.
    Even if it takes one week.

    Intricate soul intricate soul

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    just one question. That space you inserted [COLOR], what's that mean exactly? other than that I like the concept of just a week, I'm thniking Creation ni the biblical sense~ let me know ok. Thanks again for posting, bye.

    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Stunning, so very beauitful this short poem is. The lines I quote because they are stong in this poem and my favourite of course. The whole poem was good though. Thanks for sharing


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    Hey Intricate, I am sure that was a typo, so I corrected it.

    Kimberly ;)

    P.S. Hey..lil brother, hope you don;t mind this post..Love Ya!! This was very thought provoking and also had a clear message in it Spidy. I saw allot of you and our conversations in this one. What if only one week? Wow. Very beautiful and so much meaning beyond this screen. I will call and we will talk about it lil brother. Awesome poem! Love Ya! Get out of that web! LOLOL

    Kim;)

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