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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    "Only You"

    A friendly smile, a friendly face,
    A friendly touch, a warm embrace.
    A summer sky, a gentle wind,
    A special place, a special friend.

    When morning glories catch the sun,
    And says a new day has begun,
    And lilacs drink the morning dew.
    I cannot help but think of you.

    Of helping hands and quiet words,
    and distant sounds of humming birds,
    From every moment that we share,
    Shows you now how much I care.

    Whispering words bring joyous bliss,
    Your heart is closer than a kiss.
    My senses melt beneath your spell,
    So deep in love with you I fell.

    The autumn times brings leaves of gold,
    And westward winds blow in the cold,
    And stormy clouds hide skies of blue,
    My dear my heart loves only you.



    Blessed be
    Forestdawn

    Jeez Banned

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    Oh................ that made me
    feel all warm in side as if the
    sun shine had just drawn it's
    blanket over me, .........nice.

    Thanks for the read.


    Posted By Jeez | Nov 11, 2006
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    This is a great poem ;)

    Thanks for the read.


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Nov 11, 2006
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    Dear Sally,

    I loved this one. This made me feel good inside, and smile on the outside. Like the poem is giving out "poetic hugs". The rhyme scheme is great, and the fuzzy feeling I got from it, poured like melted butter. Great work!!!

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}}:)

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Merry Meet friends:

    Jeez: I am glad that I could make you feel warm and cozy. :)


    Me: Thanks for your comment. It made my day :)


    Kim: You are indeed welcome. Your comments are always a joy to read. :)


    It's poets/writers like yourselves that keeps me inspired. Thanks lots!!And I always look forward in reading all your posts as well.


    Blessed be

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