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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by mangodroplet, Apr 24, 2008.



    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    We run through the orchard-
    our Hearts mingling,
    our minds entwining.

    Lost in the sunshine-
    the leaves dancing,
    the lights frolicking.


    Knowing forever that he is mine,
    and I his.






    hi my loverlies! I haven't been here in a while...sorries! been busy...
    anyway...this was kinda sparked by the first date I've ever had... :]

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    This is so lovely!
    You're good with big impact with few words.
    I love it, good job!


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 24, 2008
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    shayshay741 New Member

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    I love this poem, the simplictity of it, but also the true images it creates. Wellll done! :D

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    I like how simple this poem is
    it makes it so beautiful


    Posted By Smiley24_7 | Apr 25, 2008
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    wow...thanks...i didn't think it was anything particularly good. Just something I needed to get out ;]
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Wow MS MANGO- you've done a bit of growing up I see... There's is such maturity in your poem - but I still like that it has the everso beautiful hint of innocense. Never loose that innocense my dear :D

    Yes! That is SWEET!
    Thanx for the sharing!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 27, 2008
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    thank you, MsJ!

    Yes...in this time...I have done some growing. Gone through pain, through learning. And I like to think I've matured a bit :]

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