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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, Jun 3, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Orgasmic Rhapsody
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    It was the type of rain for lovers
    A soft gentle warm and sensuous rain
    Sitting in the gazebo listening to the gentle rhythm
    As the raindrops hit the roof and ground
    Closing my eyes I can hear her sultry hum
    To the soft beat of the rain’s song
    ~
    My crystal blue eyes peek
    In as you nap in a dreamy sleep.
    A crystalline white lace veil
    Conceals your acquiescent nakedness.
    ~
    The rosy silhouette of her curves seduces me
    Her moist sensuous lips beg for a kiss;.
    I am compelled to follow the silhouette of her slender arm.
    Quietly I move to get a closer to watch her dream.
    ~
    Standing beside her bed, silently,
    Her naked body is now visible;
    Her polished fingernails rest atop
    Her manicured golden garden,
    As beads of sweet nectar glitters on it petal.
    ~
    Her smile is radiant, her soft lips silently beg
    For that one spectacular kiss;
    Your body begs for a soft gentle caress
    Her erotic slumber is inviting, insisting that I join in.
    ~
    But I must resist the temptation.
    To awaken her would shatter this fantasy
    Though I feel her eroticism.
    That’s sending shivers through my body`
    I wonder which of us is vulnerable to the lures of this love
    Gently, I caress your tender arm, you softly moan
    As the room fills with the aroma of a fiery passion
    Am I the vision of her fantasy?, her dream.
    ~
    Tenderly you embraced me in your arms
    As shutters of orgasmic pleasures rages inside you
    The rain is pounding out a heavy rhythm
    As the rumbling thunder echos
    To her fantasies orgasmic rhapsody.


    Posted By Bear | Jun 3, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Bear:

    Expertly censored from the norm.

    It speaks words of love and says it all in the last two lines.


    " As the rumbling thunder echoes
    To her fantasies orgasmic rhapsody"

    Beautiful

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so very much Sally I always try to make my sensual poems sensuous not runchy thank you for your beautiful comment
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 3, 2007
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    Dear Bear,

    Whew! Ok, it raining here, now what? LOLOLOL Just teasing! However, not about this poem. no your writes are soft erotica, and sensual, and exquisite. They make me read every word carefully, as I do not want to miss---anything! **wink** Like I said you should write for Harlequin, and I mean that. This was Bombastic!!!

    {{{{{~~~***KIMBERLY***}}}}};)2

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Kimberly {{{{{{{{ Tom }}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
    hugs kisses
    tom
    ps Im going to finish the legend story and send it to Harlequin hopefully with your help


    Posted By Bear | Jun 3, 2007
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