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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, Sep 21, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    “Orgasmic”
    ~
    Dawn, radiant sunlight of a new day
    Eyes still closed not wanting to wake
    Slowly I open my eyes
    ~
    Aroused by the warm surprise
    Of you lying by my side
    Always in my thoughts
    Always in my soul
    ~
    The Love I have for you
    Comes from the depth
    Within the realm of my heart
    ~
    Embraced by the depths of your eyes
    Exposing your fiery inner thoughts
    That brings a warm smile to my face
    ~
    Lost in the pleasure of your embrace
    Moved by the music of your heart
    Basking in the excitement of our passion
    ~
    Not wanting the day to start
    Wanting to be locked in that moment
    As it is etched in our minds for all eternity


    Posted By Bear | Sep 21, 2007
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ahh Bear what a lovely tribute and ooh to wake up feeling that precious to someone..... anyone really. Ahh but a woman can dream hmm? This is a beautiful poem I cannot pic just one stanza as my favorite ..... it is all wonderful.

    *hugs*

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Sep 21, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Mysty

    Thank you so much sweetie and yes a woman can dream heres wishing you some sweet dream lover to come your way.
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Sep 21, 2007
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