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    v3sista U Know Me

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    If you see me and I am crying, don't feel bad.
    Dry my eyes and smile at me; enough said!

    If you walk by and say, "Hi", and I don't reply.
    Say a prayer that God lifts my sorrow, then try again tomorrow.

    If you look at me and there's no smile on my face.
    Squeeze my hand and show me the sun.

    Cause when I am Laughing,
    I want you to laugh with me.

    When I am Dancing,
    come dance with me,

    And when I feel Happy,
    I will share that with you too.

    WE are our Brother's Keeper,
    "I care about you".


    Posted By v3sista | Jan 29, 2007
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    V, we sure are our brother's keeper. You words say it all and I don't think we can ever say it enough! Beautiful work...I could not agree more! Well done, V!


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    Dear Ms V,

    The title is what captured me in the first place. Ahhh, indeed we are, and more people should practice what you have scribed here. This was a lovely piece, with a message that speaks volumes, and straight to the point. When I finished reading it, I said "Yup, tis is so true!". Thank you for sharing your beautiful work Ms V. :bravo:

    {{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}

    v3sista U Know Me

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    Benny and Kim TY 4 taking the time to read and comment. I need encouragement every now and then. Been through a real blockage. Thinking about how I want to be treated when I'm down and how I'd like to think I'd return the same to another in need. We'd all be so much better off if we could be more of our brother's keeper.

    Thanks again.

    V3


    Posted By v3sista | Jan 29, 2007
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