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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by ronn55, Dec 23, 2006.



    ronn55 godschild

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    You're my mocha almond mint
    An aromatic fragrance divine
    Every now and then I just need a hint
    To soothe this palate of mine

    How can an aroma keep me so mesmorized?
    Each day I crave so for the taste
    Oh so lucious the nectar between her thighs
    Her sensual fragrance I desire to embrace

    The arrogance of her body emanates pleasure
    Even her imperfections shows no flaw
    In the shrine of her love I've found a treasure
    In her radiance I'm seized with awe

    When I bask in her rooms of delight
    There's so many surprises at every turn
    Her inner beauty brings forth a light
    Oh for this love, my soul does yearn

    Yes you are my mocha almond mint
    An aromatic fragrance divine
    Every now and then I just need a hint
    To soothe this palate of mine


    Posted By ronn55 | Dec 23, 2006
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    yeah... this will definatelly score you a few cool points with the ladies...lol... on the serious, nice canvas.

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    Thank you for your time and review. Where would we be without the ladies.


    Posted By ronn55 | Dec 23, 2006
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    Is it hot in here, or just me? :sweating:

    ronn55 godschild

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    Thank you, I just had to say it:hooray: :hooray: :hooray:


    Posted By ronn55 | Dec 23, 2006
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    Whoa! It's not just you, PD! It IS hot in here! LOL!

    Nice write, Ron! Must be those perfect ... rhymes, that are turning up the heat!
    As long as you are posting, poet friend - I'll be reading!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 24, 2006
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    Thank you so much. This has been one awesome experience for me.:partytime:


    Posted By ronn55 | Dec 24, 2006
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    uhhhemmmmmm.....No that I have cooled off...shall I endeavor to start again? LOL!!!

    Dear Ron,

    This was such a masterful exquisite scribe you have shared here with us today!!!! Beautifully structured, executed, balanced, and every damn thing in between!!!! I almost want to say that this piece should have music to it. Oh how I would love to be "her", for just a minute! LOL!!! Seriously, you did turn up the heat, with a masterpiece. Next time provide towels would ya'!! LOL! Bravo, dear poet, bravo! :bravo: Take Care, and I got my eye on your work.;)

    ~*Painted*~

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    Your comment made me want a cigarette and I don't even smoke. Thank you. It's a pleasure knowing my work has such an affect on the reader. Be blessed:pacman:


    Posted By ronn55 | Dec 24, 2006
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    Ron...beautiful words said, I agree with the Ladies, it's hot!!!

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    Thank you for your time and gracious review. May you and yours have a blessed XMAS


    Posted By ronn55 | Dec 26, 2006
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    Thank you for your kind words. Very much appreciated:jump:


    Posted By ronn55 | Dec 28, 2006
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