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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by tgeoff, Dec 25, 2007.



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    Another thoughtless, icy glance,
    Pierces her heart, toughens her skin.
    A child should be of whimsy and dance,
    Not mourning love that should have been.

    Rigid heart, a face refusing to return her smile.
    As Daddy's daughter offers up her Valentine.
    Un-viewed and exiled under some recipe file,
    A paper heart, sentenced for an unknown crime.

    Cold is the soul that refuses her affection,
    As unanswered tiny arms reach out for you.
    Now your fever grows as does the infection.
    Your time grows short, tight lips turning blue.

    Her Mommy died birthing this angel,
    A baby born from a stranger's attention.
    Now your fate's not Heaven but Hell,
    As her baby blue tears flow like an ocean.

    Ego scores one, compassion zero,
    Another loss for a heartfelt need.
    All she wanted was you, her hero;
    A child punished for a mother's deed.

    Cold is the taste as she kisses your cheek,
    That warms your spirit, that says as it's rising,
    "I am so sorry for not returning the love you seek,
    My heart is now your paper Valentine, darling."

    "Why is she crying, her head upon my chest"?
    "Because pride has trumped you at your bed.
    You missed the chance, your soul will not rest.
    She cannot hear you, poor bastard you're dead".


    Posted By tgeoff | Dec 25, 2007
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    This one got to me cuz i've seen it happen and the only thing worse than watching a child wilt is watching their hope die with it. nicely done.

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Dec 26, 2007
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