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    Baphomet New Member

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    Paradise Eyes

    Another page turns, inviolate snow falls covering our tracks, never to look back
    Dawn's rose captures our attention, eyes focused on dreams, our heart our shepherd

    In time we step, pushing the envelop of belief
    Stumbling to meet your ardor, a smile sends me eternal love

    Thought I'd lost you in this life, gave you away to the future for the grace of now
    But you're all around me, our nexus resiliently infused with watery love, precious tears

    Promises held in tomorrow's hands keep us light, flying perfection's precision
    Nurturing each moment's bloom, soaring with the mistral's whim carrying us to Abraham's bosom


    Posted By Baphomet | Mar 13, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    This is quite beautiful.
    I like the ending. Lovely words and feel.
    Welcome to JPIC :)


    Posted By Moonchild | Mar 13, 2008
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    Dear Baphomet,

    This is is refreshing, novel, and beautiful. I love the play with poetic intimacy here and the images are strong as the content. Would make a lovely painting. Thank you for sharing with us and yes...:welcome3:

    Kim :)

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