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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    take a little time,
    my avenues are open wide,
    steal a look that makes me blind,
    find out why you paralyze my mind,

    take a prize the one you hate,
    give a look that exonerates me,
    fractions of my love equals desire,
    these fractions rise,
    like they're built by a scientist,

    I don't want to bring you down,
    but my looks could kill right now,
    not as if too say I'm handsome
    yet even charming,
    but don't forget,
    the state of my mind is quite alarming,

    She just bleeds away my time,
    leaves me paralyzed,
    with what I find about her,

    No this isn't a state of shock,
    nor is it a monkey with a chime,
    tick tock,
    I'm running out of time,
    every time,
    time I try to make,

    You use my super powers,
    you could name me vulnerable boy,
    I bought you flowers,
    so let's make a little noise,

    I'm jumping off towers,
    just too see if you'll play
    with me like a toy,

    This isn't set yet,
    this isn't said yet,
    I don't want all the way in,
    just want to get my feet wet,

    take this little piece of my heart,
    since I don't want you to paralyze every part

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    good work

    Loved this one very much...emotional...visual...love sure is tough when one is smitten...yeah.


    Posted By Benny | Nov 20, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    thanks Benny,

    yeah its not east but I hope you caught the suttle humor in this too

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