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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Passion Murmurs

    water in my glass; dew
    supple as a longing love,
    lingering shadows

    clock caws like ravens,
    crow ticks crucial as subtle
    cravings in my loins

    tapping on floors
    like whisperings of secret laws
    at my love-soaked sheets

    music like mambos:
    wind on my window, raucous
    like passion murmurs


    Copyright © 2005 Jacquii Cooke


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 17, 2006
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    Ms Jacquii, Whoa!!!!! This is a masterpiece!! I read this four times! How do you do it? The juxtaposition of certain words are just brilliant! So much depth and meaning. The passionate imagery came alive in my mind, left my cerebral tingling! Then, I read it out loud a few times, the words seemed to demand that type of omnipotence. I am sure you have many masterpieces, but this is Maya Angelou style! I hope to be able to write on this level one day, Ms Jacquii, {at the top of the foodchain!} LOL!! The world is yours! Loved It! What was your inspiration for this Ms Jacquii?

    Much Luv'...KIM:)
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Thanx KIM - This is the poem on the 1st page of my site JPS (http://PoetJC.info) Initially it was a series of haiku that I'd written - I decided to combine and make a longer piece - And what you've so graciously commented on is the result!

    Of course the piece is about L-O-V-E... Well - me wanting it anyway LOL - I wanted to write a poem about the lust factor. That's it :)

    Thanx for your fond words!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 18, 2006
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    Ms Jacquii, I simply love this, as I have read this beauty several times. How genious to combine Haikus! Yes, the L-O-V-E radiates from this piece. As I have stated, this is a masterpiece. Can we comment twice? This deserves it!!!!:clapping:

    Kim
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    :blush2: Well thank you very kindly Ma'am - I appreciate the love - This is one of my favorite pieces, as I was going through a really tough time in my life as far as love is concerned and just wanted to reaffirm that it does indeed still exist!

    Thanx for the comment!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 31, 2006
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    Well... Ms J...,

    This... well this...
    it stired more then
    my mind...

    You know what '
    mean.

    Almost feel as if 've
    been...

    :humped:


    Posted By Jeez | Apr 18, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    msJ your good you know how I kno wyou describe dsomething so obscure beautifully,
    you see what people normally think this is is a coma after sex,
    now what you made it is coma after sex that i'd love to have lol

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    wow...
    i can't relate to it just yet....
    but this poem made me feel.
    feel...something that i don't know how to say.
    but thanks for it.
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    Thanx JEEZ, ERIK & MANGO
    I appreciate your comments.
    This poem is so simple, but so is love.
    Thanx for taking time to see the love in this piece.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 22, 2007
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    Wow!! Nice poem Jacquiic! Thank You for sharing this work with us!
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Thank you CURTIS for you nice comment.
    The enthusiasm and love is appreciated ;)

    Jacquii.
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    Ms Jacquii, I read this poem again, to get those feelings back, and feel your words. Truly awesome tribute to LOVE indeed. Thanks again for sharing!

    ~~~KIM~~~:< (@

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    WOW very passionate and sensual love the wonderful image portrayed beautiful write
    Ms,J


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    Wow...had to remove my shirt and socks to finish reading this one! You had my complete attention all the way through this work, MsJ...and I could not remove myself from it, nor did I want to! Compelling reflection and masterful work!


    Posted By Benny | May 11, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Thanx very much KIM :blush2: - It is one of my alltime favorite poems by me.
    I'm so glad you enjoy this poem!

    Thanx for such a wonderful comment TOM.
    I'm happy you enjoy the poem as well ;)

    OMG - BENNY please put your clothes back on :crazy:
    Thanx for the exquisite commentary lol - I appreciates it very much.

    :jpicrocks:

    Jacquii.

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