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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by jamiesfantasy, Oct 22, 2006.



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    As your body gently presses against mine, I feel the tingling rush of euphoria cascading down my arms and legs, down to my toes.
    The hazy, smoky lights capture the essence of your silhouette.
    The rythmn of the music forces our feet to jump higher, graceful as a horse trotting in a parade. Swaying to the left, dipping into oblivion.
    The other dancers stop dancing...every eye on us as we leap across the floor in perfect harmony.
    My face feels flushed as I gaze across the room catching a glimpse of the audience.
    You are in deep concentration, as you look straight into my eyes.
    Nothing seems to matter.....

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    This comment may be late and I hope you're still on the site....This poem speaks so softly to me, itz like you can imagine these two lovers dancing a passionate dance and just being intertwined with each other, caught in each others worlds, eyes locked and focused on each other's soul.....

    This part made me feel warm



    Astonishing; thank You


    Posted By KingAce | Dec 18, 2006
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    Jamiesfantasy - Nothing seems to matter.....
    How well put, the very essence of love.
    Zvi
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    Posted By athlone | Dec 18, 2006
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    don't usually

    read much the exotic- eroticas, but needed some spice this morning yeah. although the prose format was a lil distracting, the essence was still made clear. the conclusion says it all. nice-
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    Dear jamiesfantasy,

    You really set the tone, and honored imagery in this piece. I think I was there!! LOL!!! Simply lovely, and made me think that this would be the foundation of a beautiful painting to complement this piece. Thank you for sharing!!

    ~*Painted*~

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