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    louisianagal529 New Member

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    I watched Hades pull me down
    into the pits of neverending pain,
    cursed for all eternity
    to burn in merciless flame.

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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Wow LOUISIANAGAL - poignant piece of poetry - not really that versed in Greek mythology --- we did have a class of only the Greek mythology in highschool, that's been years ago though --- But this poem really does speak of Persiphone's plight.

    A thoroughly enjoyable read - The rhyme scheme works rather well - The structure is lovely also - Thanx for sharing AND Welcome to the Community!

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    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jun 26, 2007
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    mmm.... Fresh Poetry! Painfully Good! Enjoyed:vampire:

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Short, but really good!
    Loved it!

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    wow...really enjoyed it...mythology has always been one of my favorite subjects...i love the simplicity of it speaking volumes...thanks for sharing.


    Posted By Checkmate | Jun 30, 2007
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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Well L-Gal,

    This is very crisp word smithing! Kinda eerie though.

    Thanks for sharin...

    Jerry

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