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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    "Petals in the Wind"

    Where once they bloomed in early rains,
    Wild flowers ranged toward the sky.
    Such beauty spanned across the plains.
    Like reaching out to wave good-bye.

    Wild flowers ranged toward the sky,
    Confetti colors gently blend.
    Like reaching out to wave good-bye,
    Painting beauty to the end.

    Confetti colors gently blend,
    Floating through where branches bend.
    Painting beauty to the end,
    Are now just petals in the wind.

    Floating through where branches bend,
    Such beauty spanned across the plains.
    Are now just petals in the wind,
    Where once they bloomed in early rains.




    Blessed be
    Forestdawn

    lanaia74 New Member

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    Totally AWESOME!


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 13, 2006
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    butchiesmom JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Totally awesome! I thought the first stanza was fantastic with the last two lines capturing my imagination...

    Such beauty spanned across the plains.
    Like reaching out to wave good-bye.

    Then I went on to read the rest and couldn't stop! Such a great poem!
    The imagery is soooo vivid!

    Fantastic, Sally!
    Gail

    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    great write, strong images, enjoyed the read :bravo:


    Posted By Echoes | Nov 13, 2006
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Sally,

    How beautiful, and poetically aesthetic. I loved how you took the end of every stanza, and incorporated it to be the third line of the next stanza. Definitely depicting range, and creativity. All the while painting lovely scenes that were very realistic. Made me want to go see this little piece of paradise. Great scribe Sally. Bravo Poet...Bravo!! Thank you for sharing!!

    Painted

    Zeblon New Member

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    Tremendous piece..I love it..nuf sed!


    Posted By Zeblon | Nov 14, 2006
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Awesome!

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