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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Jeez, Feb 23, 2007.



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    Posted By Jeez | Feb 23, 2007
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    delightful poem so playful and even suttly humorful,
    the wet and dry of your sky is a very good line
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    OK Jeez......why do you keep doin this to me!!!! I love this piece....oh it says sooooo much, so subtle, so serene, so you!!!!! I think, you make people fall in love with your poetry. I have!!!!! I love It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bravo:

    {{{{~~~**KIM**~~}}}};)
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    this is a lovely piece, Jeez.
    wafting gently on the breeze
    of our emotions..beautiful!

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    Had to comment twice, as I read this again, and again, and tell you this is amazing!! Again, how do you pack so much emotion in a few words is truly a gift!!!:cute: Love it!!!!!!

    Kimberly;)

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    Posted By Jeez | Feb 23, 2007
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    Tis why I named Ms Jeez.....the Mistress of Petite Sensual Canvas'!!!!!!

    Kim:wub: :hooray: ;)2 :laugh: :cute:

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    Posted By Jeez | Feb 24, 2007
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    Jen...you speak volumes in so few words. Wonderful poem...deep reflection. Loud statement.


    Posted By Benny | Mar 4, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 6, 2007
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    An interesting modern form.

    Many thanks.

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    Posted By Jeez | Mar 8, 2007
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