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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Pie

    juicy, creamy
    dripping from my chin.....
    tastes of sweet honey
    coaxed out from deep within

    treasure buried
    just for me, brewed in
    a dark secret place ,
    the taste is rich like sin

    ©2008 Mysty Johnson


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 26, 2008
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    crazymamma5 angelic mamma

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    a little hidden messages there!!!!! Really interesting makes your mind wonder is it REALLY pie your talking about!!!
    Nice write
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    LOL ...... I don't know ... I told you ....you decide ;) Thanks for commenting Racheul :)

    :hug:

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 27, 2008
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    your welcome

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    I have doubts about this poem--some of it looks okay, some of it does not.

    It also smells of pastries and sweet foods which make women and men obese in the USA.

    But it has its good points too--the second stanza is fine and shows great talent.
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    EGADS.......... It is about Oral SEX!!!! does that spell it out any clearer Nikos...... here in America...... over this side of the world ..... guys call eating out a woman ..... eating Pie.


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 28, 2008
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    I see.

    I did not know about that use of "pie", so please discount what I said.

    However, with that particular use of the idiom, the poem is valid only for American readers--an Englishman would not have a clue, for example.

    Thanks.
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    No actually .........younger men from Great Britain also know the meaning of the term Pie.....

    When you play as many online games as I do ....you learn about the more youthful idioms and terminology fast. Yes it sometimes really irks my senses.... such a rape of our words but lol sometimes .... it is funny.


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 29, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    eeps this was a double post......... so edited..


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    I've learned something new today, lol. What you call 'pie' we used to call 'hot box lunch', lol. Oops, I think I've aged myself, lol.

    Now that I've read the comments I can see it. I know you're going to roll on the floor with laughter, but I really thought you were talking about eating a real pie, lmao! Oh my, I really need to get out more often, lol. Rereading it I can see my mistake, lol.

    I'm impressed!
    hugs,
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    A 'hot box lunch' boy never heard that.
    you know that I just had to comment on that one,lol
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    I knew I was 'dating' myself by revealing that little bit of info, lol.
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    LOL Gail ...... you almost had me choking I was laughing so hard. Hey Girl I am 46 so meh age means nothing ..... just more experience under our belts.. or is that stockings lol ;)

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 29, 2008
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    A belt with elastic waists? Stockings? You must have places to be, lol. I stay at home, most of the time I don't even wear socks, lol.

    So funny!

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    what do you mean half the time you don't even wear socks when we go anywhere. lol
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    yeah sometimes I do have places to be lol but all in good fun :)


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 29, 2008
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    Now I want broccoli and bacon pie :faint:


    Posted By fpoetic | Jan 30, 2008
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    crazymamma5 angelic mamma

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    broccoli and bacon pie what a strange combination
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    Sounds good to me!
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    shhhhhh I am starving ..... LoL


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 30, 2008
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