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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Mysty, Jan 26, 2008.



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    ok.,..what was the question? somethin about sensual something...kinda went blank after that.

    this is hot. this poem could get me in an awful lot of trouble. lol

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Feb 1, 2008
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    by the way,

    i've noticed over the last few months that your writing is much more polished and has a strong but delicate focus to it particularly with regard to sensuality lol. i think you should try more stuff like back to the wall. it might feel weird for awhile, but i bet there are messages you can bring from that genre that you might not otherwise attempt.

    kudos

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Feb 1, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks Zaac ...... I have alot like that ...... am working on one now..... :)


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 3, 2008
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    don't know about sensual, but kinda sounds like my MO lol. in fact, i think i might have had a flashback to wilder days.

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    hot lunch box...hmmmm.

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Feb 3, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    LOL Zaac


    ;)


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 4, 2008
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    Dear Mysty,

    I enjoyed the poem in all its brevity,which adds even more depth in my personal opinion. Just enough to again lead the reader to wherever their mind takes them. I love these kind of poems of yours..like a peek-a-boo if you will. Keep'm coming.

    Kimberly :)
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    Thank You Kim ... :) Miss You Sis..

    Love

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 13, 2008
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    Perhaps then NIKOS - you need to find a poetry Forum dedicated to the Englishman and/or POMPOUS Greekman, as sometimes your ridiculous commentary is not wanted, nor needed here :D

    Jacquii.

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    well I knew what it was about and I think the second line has merit....the first two lines are a little crude for my tastes but that is just me. You definitely got your point across though ;)


    Posted By BekiLynn | Feb 23, 2008
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    Beki if it is too crude for you then kindly do not read or comment.


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 24, 2008
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