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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Tanax, Oct 15, 2007.



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    Played

    It was quite funny how we met,
    you came from nowhere on my screen,
    through the cybernet,
    you're not like any other girl I've seen.

    I liked you from the start,
    you're so funny and sweet.
    If we were together I would never wanna be apart,
    everyday I would wanna meet.

    But I feel you're beeing ripped from me,
    by one of my best friends.
    Why can't you see?


    But you think he's funny, and you're probably playing me,
    so what do you really care?
    This time I payed the toll, a big fee,
    I've said this before, but my life is really never fair!


    Posted By Tanax | Oct 15, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    eep....I'm sorry nobody commented on this before "/


    BUT AHHH!
    Your poems are so sad at the end....
    life is never fair. period.
    but we can make it better :]

    Find someone who cares about you....don't worry about petty people xD

    *huggles*

    be more happy, please? :)

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    No problems :)
    Yea, I know.. sorry :boohoo::boohoo:


    Posted By Tanax | Nov 16, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    BE MORE HAPPY!
    no crying *cries*

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    But I just.. can't see any positive right now :(


    Posted By Tanax | Nov 16, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    "/
    How about I say I care about you-Does that make you more happy? ;]

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