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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    "Poet, Speak Up Your Mind!!" Author: Stardust.

    Poet!! Speak up your mind!!
    Don´t waste any more time!!
    If the whole World is blind,
    Show them the way, make them see
    The Light in their lives...
    And what they ought to be.

    Poet!! Don´t make the utterless silence
    Shut your mouth with the real truth!!
    Poet, speak the language of your heart.
    Don´t let people stand on the way
    And make us get falling apart!!...
    God wants you to lead the way,
    For others to follow His grace and faith.

    Poet!! Don´t let the poignant grief
    Of the World full of sins
    Infect your pure soul!!
    The honey-dew and nectarine´s juice
    Flow in every fine lace of your poetical way.

    Forgetting the blues,
    You lead each moment you post,
    Making this World shine,
    And become a positive and fine host,
    Riding the rainbows in every day light.

    Poet, this poem is just for you.
    You make people think, laugh or cry.
    Your poems may change the World too,
    For you plant the seeds into new dreams,
    That feed the good soil with the sunbeam.
    Poet, these words are for you with the morning dew.

    An everlasting glimpse of Heaven´s Poetry
    To view on the stage of a poet´s heart,
    It makes a carousel play the music
    Into a glorious and everlasting dance.

    Author: Stardust. (New Version written by 3-2008.)
    (Original Version written by 11-2006.)


    Posted By stardust | Apr 10, 2008
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    Dear Ms Stardust,

    This was so exhilarating and from the first word..Poet! with an exclamation mark..I read this poem out loud! Demands attention and is so vibrant with love and enthusiasm! I loved his Ms Stardust, it is full of radiance. I know where to go for truly a spiritual blast and is here in the honor in all your poetry. Love ya and take care.

    Painted :hug:
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    Dear Ms. Kim:
    Thank you so very much, for taking your precious time to read my poetry, and for offering your wise comments!! I am the one who is truly honoured by your awesome presence, sweetheart. I wrote this poem for ALL POETS, for you and for all... It is so important to speak the language of your heart. So, this is exactly what I have been doing at the Forums. My poems may not be so perfect in structure, rhymes or metrics, but they do convey a true message -from my heart of hearts- to the whole World. At least, this is MY TRUE DREAM!! I also love your poetry and stories, dear Ms. Kim.
    Kind Regards,
    Starry.:sun::sun:


    Posted By stardust | Apr 12, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Wow! I love how you made this poem into a chant, a mantra of sorts MS STARRY and I love how empowering this write is. You have managed to say "I believe in you, do your thang Poet" --- It's a message that many could really use - I thought it was really good and a personal message that makes me smile.

    Thanx for posting!

    JAcquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 12, 2008
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Dearest Ms. Jacquii:
    OH!! I am so HAPPY now!! V.I.P., very important people like yourself are reading my poem. Wooowww!!! It is outstanding, sweetheart. The important message that I convey is that, Poets, should speak the language of their hearts, and should let the whole World listen to the words of wisdom of their poems. That is a true message that I hold in my heart of hearts for ALL POETS. Thank you, Ms. Jacquii, for reading my poem, and for replying with your kind message!!
    Send you my warm regards always, and God bless you, Ms. Jacquii!!
    Cordially,
    Starry.:thumbsup::thumbsup:


    Posted By stardust | Apr 13, 2008
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    Aw Shux! Thanx MS STARRY - I don't know about being V.I.P. LOL - Just being MsJacquiiC is all - and love the message of your poem! Thanx again for sharing it with us ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 13, 2008
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Ms. Jacquii:
    What I´ve been trying to say before is that, you make me feel important, when you read and reply to my poems. It means that my poems are worth. You have a special touch to make people feel so good about themselves, when you offer your comments. You see, I am not a professional writer, I just write with my heart. If people like what I write, it makes me feel good and encouraged to keep on writing. If people do not say anything, it means that my poems are nothing worth to read. Anyway, thanks a million for replying to me!! Your words of encouragement are so important for all Poets in here. I put my idea in a nutshell, if my poems mean something to somebody, they will mean the whole World to me. That is all!! Thank you again, Ms. Jacquii for sharing your point of views with me!!
    Cheers,
    Starry.:thankyou::thankyou::sun::sun:


    Posted By stardust | Apr 14, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    :blush: Oh my GoodNESS! Now I'm blushing :blush2:

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 14, 2008
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    :thankyou::thankyou:
    Ms. Jacquii, you are the greatest friend!!
    Cheers,
    Starry.


    Posted By stardust | Apr 14, 2008
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    Peace Stardust,

    Your poem sprinkles the living dust of stars upon our brows. We are honoured by your words, and so I would like to return honour to you.

    God bless you for a beautiful poem, and for simply being you.

    Abdur Rahman
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    :wow: See MS STARRY - this is what I was trying to say about your poem :yes:
    Beautiful words ABDUR!

    Jacquii.
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    Thank you, Abdur, for stopping by, reading my poem and writing your kind comments!!
    It is always my pleasure to share my work with other Poets.
    Yes!! I like being myself. My poems are only coming from my heart, since I am not a professional poet. Thank you again for visiting my words!!
    Thank you, MS JACQUII, for your inspirational words of encouragement towards me!! I am so grateful, Ms. Jacquii...
    Cordially,
    Starry.


    Posted By stardust | Apr 17, 2008
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    I love your work, Stardust and love this one as well. An exhortation to poets to speak their minds, so the world where they're going wrong or right! It speaks to your soul in a personal way.

    I love the above stanza! It shows exactly what a poet can do!

    hugs,
    Gail
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Dearest friend, Gail:
    It is so wonderful to see you reading my poem. I am so honoured by your presence and wise evaluation!! I think, poetry should be the language of the heart, so to speak. In other words, I dedicated my poem to all Poets.
    Thank you so much for giving me your point of views!!
    Cordially,
    (((HUGS))) Starry.:girllove::angel:


    Posted By stardust | Apr 17, 2008
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