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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Sealiah, Apr 2, 2007.



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    Sealiah Poetic Dancer

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    A heart forgotten
    A dream unfulfilled
    A Time of stasis
    A body Stilled

    What for do we wander
    when souls ache in pain?
    Yearning, reaching,
    Again and again?

    Occasional glimpses
    Reach for the stars
    A time for all seasons
    When you know who you are

    Why just exist
    When the heart wants to Live?
    Why not reach for the stars?
    It's the journey that gives...


    Posted By Sealiah | Apr 2, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I liked this allot it has a smooth flow,
    and I'll take a guess this is about going after the one you love since its in emotional romantic,

    its the journey that gives very nice end line,
    leaves it a conclusion thats open for any option you choose,
    nice breezy poem
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    Thanks Erik. ^^ It was about love, life, etc... basically, it's about Living, not just existing.


    Posted By Sealiah | Apr 2, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    nice, I like those kinds of poems,
    hopefully it'll wake someone up as I hope poems like that do
    have an impact,
    live don't exist,
    is a good message,
    some people just need to realize what living is first,
    as soem think there living but really existing,
    although it is common to feel like a hollow shell for everyone sometimes even if they are living to its fullest
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    This is beautifully uplifting, Sealiah.

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    :wow: Sealiah, this was amazing! Did you write this for me? Just teasing, however, seems to message that needs to be spread out on a Hallmark card. Ya know the commercial says....when you want to send the best.....send a Hallmark!!!! LOVED IT!!!!

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