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    I write this piece in praise of Thee, Oh God.
    Grace, and Mercy you freely give to all.
    The wealthy, poor and even to the clod.

    Because You show such love, our love's not odd.
    You gave Your only Son to save our fall.
    I write this piece in praise of Thee, Oh God.

    You are Almighty God, no demigod.
    Praise be Your name, no other can enthrall.
    The wealthy, poor and even to the clod

    It calls for more than just a simple nod.
    When Psalms are read that you cannot recall.
    I write this piece in praise of Thee, Oh God.

    To serve you, God, should not be done slipshod.
    When I cry out for peace, Your name I call.
    The wealthy, poor, and even to the clod.

    I am dust, no member of the synod.
    For you Jehovah God, I will stand tall.
    I write this piece in praise of Thee, Oh God.
    The wealthy, poor and even for the clod.


    Posted By mrsmajor | Sep 4, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Excellent praise and tribute wonderfully written MrdMajor
    hgs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Sep 6, 2007
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    mrsmajor New Member

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    Thank you so very much for your review and comments, I appreciate every word...


    Posted By mrsmajor | Sep 6, 2007
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    A very thoughtful piece Mrs Major, and I think you could change the last line of the third stanza to make an excellent villanelle.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Sep 12, 2007
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    mrsmajor New Member

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    Thank you for bringing that to my attention, it was a slip of the finger.

    Thank you for your review and kind comments. I appreciate every word.

    mrsmajor (Victoria)


    Posted By mrsmajor | Sep 12, 2007
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