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    Pressed Flower

    I pressed a flower to My lips
    and closed My eyes;
    imagined your mouth caressing Mine;
    inhaled the fragrance, made a mental note
    that you smell better
    than any rose
    that ever tickled My nose,
    or rosehips
    that ever graced These lips.
    you feel better than any velvet petal
    on satin skin.
    you taste better
    than the sweetest honey there has ever been.
    And your name in My ears
    sounds better than
    the birds at sunrise, as dark disappears.
    When I pressed this flower to My mouth,
    I thought I'd like
    to guide it South,
    to come to rest
    on mounds moist with dew,
    and imagined its gentle caresses were you.


    Karen Godson (AmazonPoet)


    Posted By AmazonPoet | Aug 29, 2006
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    Yes there is something
    hot out there tonight.

    Imagine that. :artist:


    Posted By Jeez | Aug 29, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oooo! Beautifully sensual - Reminds me of Eternity by Calvin Klein - One of my favorite scents... Delicately spiced are your words - soothing actually - The stanza I highlighted above is written just so very beautifully AMAZON :yes:

    I thank you for sharing this piece with us AND I look forward to reading more of your poetry!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 30, 2006
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