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    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Prisoner of love

    No walls,
    No fence,
    No guards with guns,
    No bars or Iron Gate,
    No shackles on
    My hands and feet,
    No cell
    Wherein I wait.

    No calendar
    To mark the time,
    No rows
    Of gloom and gray,
    No bunk or chair
    Or solitaire,
    Where I am doomed
    To stay.

    But still I am
    A prisoner,
    My freedom
    I can't gain,
    My crime is that
    I love you so,
    A prisoner
    I remain.


    Posted By ronbliss | Apr 23, 2007
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    Hestoria Hestoria

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    I luv this one. It Shows how powerful love can be.


    Posted By Hestoria | May 17, 2007
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    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Hestoria,

    You are absolutely correct. The power of love......... it can make the weakest of men, invincible or the strongest of men, can be destroyed by it. Have a wonderful day in Sunny California

    Thanks for reading and commenting.

    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | May 17, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Ron:

    This one was so awesome. I really loved it so much. It flowed flawlessly, the image was surreal. and the message was superb!

    I rated it an excellence.

    Blessings

    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Sally,
    thank you for taking the time, not only to read Prisoner of Love but also for taking the time to comment on it. I am happy that you liked it.
    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Jun 3, 2007
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