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    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    Music---Sage Sweetwater creates in multimedia, audio and graphic
    http://www.authorsden.com/adstorage/29292/bjorn_lynne-proud_warriors.mid


    Three days from
    the meeting place
    where bull elk
    bugles woman's
    arrival.

    On the 12th day
    of their trek, two
    women arrive,
    thirsty, their goatskin
    botas emptied of
    wine, skylighted before
    they drop into the
    valley to join what is
    clearly the main
    migration to the elk rut.

    For us, the mystery
    of female migration
    makes it more
    compelling,
    crossing borders,
    finding an alternative
    route, sexing each other
    at the base of a basalt
    ridge.

    Built-in curiosity
    and acute sense
    of smell, intuition
    walking in deep
    grooves of an
    age-old migration
    track, leading the
    way for other women
    to encounter.

    Leather-skinned
    nomads, wolves
    coming in close
    range of fifty feet
    of the proud
    warriors.

    Bull elk bugles,
    finding solace in
    knowledge that
    woman has arrived,
    unnamed peaks,
    mounds of beautiful
    female flesh heaved
    up.

    On this journey to
    face the challenge
    of the nature of
    woman and to save
    a piece of it, to
    witness the birth of
    woman in her natural
    habitat.

    How likely are you
    to encounter this?


    Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey SAGE - interesting story you tell... I like the ending of your piece, as it insinuates such mystery. Yeah - such is the "name" of woman. Eternal woman always evokes such mystery...

    Nice piece - Thanx for sharing it.
    BTW - beautiful beautiful picture to accompany the piece!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 31, 2006
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    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    Thanks for stoppping by and reading Proud Warriors, MsJacquii. I'm lucky. I live in the Colorado mountains and get to witness the deer and elk rut. Gives me ideas for my own heat! This poem is broadcast out to those women who are feeling the season, so Sage is blowing the clarion, bugling the mating tune...

    Sage

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    Oh you would find it. LOL

    Thanks for the read, Sage.


    Posted By Jeez | Oct 10, 2006
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    Absolutely beautiful, Sage! You have outdone yourself with this one! Love that picture too!


    Posted By Altree94 | Oct 10, 2006
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    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    Hi Tree,

    Thanks for dropping in...I can sense you are in tune with the cycles of nature up in your area. I could learn alot from you from not only your wisdom, but from your geographical location. As nature-loving women, we recognize the seasons in time of fruition when all is abloom and dormant when the season slows, giving us a time to reflect on the new growth which lies ahead. It is a good way to live, don't you think? It's good to know you, Tree...

    Warmly, Sage

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    Totally AWESOME!


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