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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    [TITLE]Spontaneous Collaboration by mojolips & MsJacquiiC[/TITLE]


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jan 15, 2008
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    very good i like


    Posted By mojolips | Jan 15, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    I like it too - great collaboration and so spontaneous - I love spontaneous poetry - Great creating with you! Thanx for the opportunity.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jan 15, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    This is wonderful. You make a great team.


    Posted By JolieH | Jan 15, 2008
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    Oooohh I love this spontaneous collab! Lovin' the Old English feel adorned with elegance.

    reflect the light
    still in you for me
    (the tempo of reason)
    dripping off my tounge.

    i give no others right but to taste
    the lips of the dew in the morn of my dreams
    and temptation so wet, longing
    never knoweth such a need; my love.

    no other can match the strain put upon my love
    "No other can match the strain put upon our love."

    :wow: One cannot read this once and feel satisfied. I love when poems leave a lingering craving to read and absorb more...and this does from alpha to omega...lovely! Congrats you two...and sooo inspiring!

    PD:)
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Thanx very much for your wonderful comment KIM and you too JOLIE - I'm glad you liked this very spontaneous write - I sort of wanted it to read as if written by one Poet and I think we accomplished that quite nicely... Unfortunately MOJOLIPS is no longer part of the JPiC Community - Seems we poeted well together - but bumped heads otherwise and he asked to be removed from the Memberlist... Oh well...

    At anyrate - thanx YAWL for the kind words and support!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jan 24, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Geez,
    I can't imagin anyone bumping heads with you Ms. jacquii. Oh well, if he's not kind to you, I'm glad he's gone.


    Posted By JolieH | Jan 24, 2008
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    WOW ..... this is really beautiful. Definitely a keeper and I will be back to re read a few times.
    You two do work magic together Ms Jacqui and Mojolips


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 26, 2008
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    MsJacquii:

    WOW! WOW! This is a total masterpiece! I think spontaneous writing is great! The collabration was right on.

    It poem speaks volumes and the imagery was flawless. It's too bad your collabrator wasn't able to keep from butting heads with you.

    All in all though the poem was great.

    Blessings
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oh - He was kind - he just didn't like that I told him to be aware of what he posts when he's three sheets to the wind and posting "poems" of only 2 words...

    Thanx MS MYSTY - I surely do appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I thought the piece was magic as well and it was such a thrill to work with him, he actually invited me to Live Chat to collab together - And the lines flowed so naturally...

    Hey MS SALLY! Thanx for the read and nice comment - I'm happy you enjoyed the poem - MOJOLIPS had some issue with a PM I sent him and asked to be removed from the JPiC Member list - so I of course didn't hesitate to oblige - It's a shame really that he'll be missing out on THE best Forum for Poets, Writers & Artistes on the entire internet...

    Anyway - Thanx YAWL for the very nice comments... I'm sure if MOJOLIPS happened by to read them - he'd appreciate them as well ;)

    Jacquii.

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