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    I was still young, and had a life.But that did not matter to no one who said they cared.
    I should have been wiser, stronger faced the word like I’d face myself.With an iron rod and broken image. But I’m drowning, I’m bleeding. I have become what I have long since feared. And that is forgotten, and erased.
    I only cut to forget. I burned to erase. Mother said it was not her problem and Father left me to my own devices. My brother said it was hideous. My sister spoke no word to me. My friend refused to be with the “broken” me. Was I not enough? Was I not worth the help?
    I went to the lake. It was a beautiful thing, I stepped into the lake, and it turned red.Maybe I’m a monster? The water turned red as I went in deeper.I was covered in blood.From head to toe.
    They town would talk about the girl.That broken girl she took so many lives that day and then retreated into the lake. She cut her mother throat.She took her Father heart.She removed her brothers brains.She cut her sister to pieces. With the only thoughts “I was not good enough for you? So now I’ll make you unwanted by everyone.” She went to see her “friends” And she smashed their heads in.
    She left them there with not a smile or a joke on their face. The lake had called. It was finally time, she slit her wrist and now she traveled in.Finally finally she cried “I can escape, good bye. Good bye” And there she sleep.There she still has no peace. But it’s better then what was before and now is here.



    Oh thank you for reading, I've got more stories. Just I wanted to show this one first, I don't mind anything helpful ! I run this horror blog that I write the stories, and well I have more stories on there.Just this one is my newest one and I wonder if it was haha bad xD But thank you for reading!!


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