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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, May 25, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Rainbow Dreams

    Memories captured like photographs,
    Lay scattered across my mind
    Blazing embers of molten sighs
    Are what you left behind
    ~
    Words can not express or describe
    Adequately your effect on me
    Those times our souls treasured most
    The whimsical waves of the loving sea
    ~
    Our melodious love, pulsating heartbeats
    Shadows vanish into radiant light
    She asked for drifting clouds
    To soften the light so the picture comes out right
    ~
    Weaving expressions, blending words
    Mixing hues, tones and colors,
    As the painter and poet share fantasies
    Of endless love, a true gift for all
    While sailing and drifting in rainbow dreams
    ~
    Memories captured like photographs
    Lay scattered across my mind
    Blazing embers of molten sighs
    Are what you left behind


    Posted By Bear | May 25, 2007
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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    so caught up in these lines not to mention the whole poem .. wot can i say .. i cant elaborate on this one coz it says it all and much more leaving no place for commentry only deserving of accolades.. those lines above are worth memorising and remembering for ever ..im smitten .. im so in awe of this piece ..thanx for sharing ..JONATHAN


    Posted By JONATHAN | May 25, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Jonathan for your fantastic comment these are my true feelings of love and how to make the love in your feel loved
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 25, 2007
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    Dear Pooh Bear :giftrose:,

    So beautiful is this poem. I loved this stanza, as the blending of love, art, poetry, and rainbow hues combine. Beautiful is Poetry, and your poetry is simply beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing.

    {{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}}:hug:

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    Thank you so much Painted for your fantastic comment
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | May 25, 2007
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    WOW Bear!

    How beautiful! The imagery in this poem is truely a masterpiece of pure art! A painting of wonderment, the words blend together as the rainbow itself spans across the sky.

    Awesome poem I loved it!!!



    Sally

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    Thank you so much Sally for your fantastic comment I am happy you enjoyed reading it
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | May 29, 2007
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    Bear,

    You do have a way
    with your words.

    Enjoyed the idea of
    photos lingering in
    the mind.

    Thanks for the
    read.


    Posted By Jeez | May 30, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much for this fantastic comment Jeez and your welcome
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | May 30, 2007
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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    WoW! This one is very beautiful to read, every line is wonderful! I loved "As the painter and poet share fantasies Of endless love" So great to read. Thanks for sharing

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    Thank you so much Deep poet and your welcome I am so happy you enjoy reading my poems
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 30, 2007
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