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    RED
    Anger
    In a rage

    Agitated state
    Blood pumping through veins
    Where reckless abandon rules

    “Serenity maintains calmness.”


    BLUE
    Upset
    Down and out

    Feelings of sadness
    Bringing on depression
    As it eats away the soul

    “Find the true path to happiness.”


    GREEN
    Envy
    Jealousy

    Desire to have
    Something others possess
    Unhappy with what you own

    “Be grateful for all you’re given.”


    BLACK
    Despair
    End of light

    A darkness spreading
    Swallowing up all hope
    Stripping life of its rewards

    “Keep open the doorway to joy.”


    WHITE
    Peaceful
    Purity

    Illuminating
    Salvation’s guiding light
    Rebirth to eternal life

    “Pure as snow, a heart that knows love.”


    MOODS
    Feelings
    Emotions

    All represented
    By corresponding hues
    Forming the rainbow of life

    “Learn well to control your colors.”


    Posted By Checkmate | Jul 14, 2007
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    Damn Scott! Excuse my language.....but can you get any better! This was top notch, creative, novel, and skillfully crafted! You have mastered this form not just in form, but the layered emotion, and that killer last line! :bravothanx: Speechless.......

    Kimberly :)

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    Kim, you are excused! It was called for! Damn!Wow doesn't cut it. Some hellacious painting there buddy.


    Posted By Kit Carson | Jul 14, 2007
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    Way to Go!

    Scott,

    What a wonderful collection with an incredible story and moral as well. I'm very happy to see this form takes its shape under your muse. Awesome. I've rated 5 stars!

    My fav:
    Thanks so much for honoring the Clarity Pyramid!

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    fantastic collection Mate amazing penning
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jul 25, 2007
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    thanks all for the comments...trying to get back into the sight and get around and view some others posts...thanks again


    Posted By Checkmate | Jul 25, 2007
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    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Now I know another form of poetry, thanks, it's nice, I'm trying a Haiku Acrostic..
    Haha, Means every starting letter of haikus make a acrostic...
    Your poem is cool, keep it up!!
    *smiles*


    Posted By KayaOtah | Jul 26, 2007
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