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    Charlotte Rutigliano New Member

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    My random moments in
    Life make me who I am.
    They define how I live my
    Life. How every moment
    Should be speical and cherished.
    I am random like the actions
    Of a wild boar.
    Random like the change
    In weather.
    Random like life.
    Because I am random
    I am love.
    Because I am random
    I am free.

    Lane New Member

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    hi Charlotte, thought i`d stop-by and read, just a note to let you know I have.


    Posted By Lane | Apr 23, 2011
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hi Charlotte and welcome to JPiC - Please familiarize yourself with the JPiC Posting Policy as I advised in the recent PM I sent, particularly the Forum Etiquette section. Also feel free to introduce yourself to the community over at the Member Introductions section.

    Anyway - nice little poem. It's all about spontaneity and keeping it fresh right? I think you captured those sentiments beautifully.

    Note - line 5 = you've misspelled "special" - At anyrate - I enjoyed this little poem. Thanks for the share and we hope to see you around posting in the forums, sharing in the poetic love as we like to do here at JPiC Forum ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 25, 2011
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    tobiasschnell Banned

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    Great, really i like it.
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Charlotte: This brings to mind the passionate and violent emotions and actions I can picture in “weather” and “love” and the calming and growth in perpetuation of “life”. I picture random flowers blooming… random leaves being pickup up on a random wind… lol! Let’s just say it made me go away for a sec.
    Good one!
    Nomad :beach:

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