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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Jeez, Apr 28, 2007.



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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 28, 2007
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    WHOA Jeez!!!!
    Slow down!
    Maybe SHE"S not ready yet!!!!
    LOL!

    Great write - as always!
    Gives me the strangest visuals - as always!

    Where is the snow when I want it???!!!
    LOL!

    :goodpost:

    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Apr 29, 2007
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    Oh Dear Lawd Jeez,

    My mind went straight to...oh well....neway.....HEY!...come to think of it.......I have a checkered shirt........ hmmmmmm. Hell, I've been ready, and all I have is Mr. Teddy Bear, so with that said.....GOODNIGHT!!!!! Loved the poem by the way! LOL!!!

    {{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}:):roflmao:
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    My Dearest Jeez :giftrose:,

    I have recuperated from the first read, lol :heat:, and came back to say, ya know, this is a very beautiful poem. The story told was so unique, the visuals are amazing, and the execution is simply impeccable Ms Jeez. What a way to meet someone, with such steamy instructions! I pressed my body to Mr. Teddy Bear, and nothing happened. LOLOLOL Just teasing, but really, I believe this is one of your finest writes! Oh yes, a 5 "PD" Purple Dot Rating :bravothanx:!!!!!! Love Ya!BTW---->I lied, I never recuperated, and I think I'll wear that checkered shirt today, lol :faint:!

    {{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}};)2

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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 29, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 29, 2007
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    Hot, steamy and (where does snow come into it Tree?) a woman on a mission!!

    Jeez, I love how you break up the wording and the spaces all come together to make the mind fill it where it wants to and make it a more alluring piece all around.

    Great write! :tybow:

    (handing out towels...again!)

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    Posted By Jeez | May 5, 2007
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