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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    In the days before the poet was born
    I was everywhere but not within
    My switchblade hiding in my boots so worn
    My mind was hellish bent on mortal sin
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    I was everywhere but not within
    Running with the wolves seemed the thing to do
    My mind was hellish bent on mortal sin
    Youngish rebels with fertile fields to sow
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    Running with the wolves seemed the thing to do
    In all the endless summer nights we raved
    Youngish rebels with fertile fields to sow
    I sought but never found the thing I craved
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    In all the endless summer nights we raved
    My switchblade hiding in the boots so worn
    I sought but never found the thing I craved
    In the days before the poet was born
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    Mike Carson
    2-16-2008


    Posted By Kit Carson | Feb 16, 2008
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    Man you ROCKED this poem and I feel it's beat within! And you did it all without a Pen!
    NICE!
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    I agree with Curtis, Mike....... Awesome write!!!

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 17, 2008
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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Curtis! So glad that I found my pen...hard to write with a switchblade!

    :thankyou:


    Posted By Kit Carson | Feb 17, 2008
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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Mysty, but I am quite taken aback by the fact that you inadvertantly called me by the wrong name and it just happens to be the name of one of those rebels I hung out with. One of those who never returned to the real world...I have never shared some of the more caustic poems about those days and leave the names out when I do.


    Posted By Kit Carson | Feb 17, 2008
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    OMG Mike ..... I Honestly don't know how I did that ...... I saw the name Ron..... and I know your name is Mike..... I am sooo Sorry I did that hon. I edited and changed it to your name.. Good lord now I am wondering. I swear I saw the name on this page. :eek: hope you can forgive me Mike?

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 17, 2008
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Hiya Kit:

    I loved Rebel Without a Pen!

    A perfect and flawless pantoum!

    WOW!! How shall I describe it? Well I believe it would be a masterpiece!
    In the days before the poet was born my favorite line. You mastered the words within the heart of the reader, and wrote it with excellence!

    I LOVED it!
    Thanks for sharing

    Sally

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    You are forgiven...but I still find it very twilight zonish that the particular name Ron came into play in a comment about this...actually blows me away, since I gave up believing in coincidence long ago. ;)
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    Thank you very much Sally.


    Posted By Kit Carson | Feb 24, 2008
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