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    lanaia74 New Member

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    In a mirror I would not dare to glare
    Afraid of what I would see starring back at me
    Would I see my worn torn soul?
    The reflection of my horrid soul there to stare?

    I would possible see my soul all bruised and scarred
    By the awful realities of life's tribulations
    A soul which by pain has been marred
    A soul which has been ran over by a hundred tons.

    A reflection of which I could not be proud
    Maybe to look in the mirror and see the truth
    Looking as if had been placed in the grim reaper's shroud
    Of this I need no proof.

    A reflection of a soul gripped by pain
    A soul draped in black
    Looking back at me is a soul that has nothing to gain
    Wanting to hide his face in shame.

    The reflection of my soul not a pretty thing
    Black and bent by life's unfair game
    The awful beast, my tears make him sing
    To see my tormented soul, life is to blame.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Dec 12, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I liked this poem allot, I should watch out your poetry is getting more age, purpose and refinement

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    wonderul work, indeed. Dark and deeply personal...yet, something we can all connect with at times...good work.


    Posted By Benny | Dec 12, 2006
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