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    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    the believer is me....
    i'm the one who came to your rescue
    when none was left....
    and i fought off all the lies you had heard
    all the authority's in thier commands..
    they never made sense now did they?
    becuase you live your life not they
    so follow where the seasons may take you
    in all the abstracts of humanity
    meet your fellow strugglers....
    they where once captive
    they now no longer slaves...
    they seen the truth before it was to late...
    they kept thier hearts open wide
    and as the sky fed them hope for a tommorow
    they now no longer wander in the night
    i pull up the shades
    i want to see the light shine on through
    to reveil all the souls looking for you
    and your briliance so mysterious
    all the darkness has kept you away from us
    come back now to our love
    we embrace the fuel
    of love, burning quietly loud in the afterglow of your glory
    take the heart of the willing and mold us to your will
    we cannot follow our own path
    seeking the assertiveness no longer
    we submit to your wisdom... we feed our hunger
    for the riema truth...
    the reima word from you

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    are you trying to show her, her beauty? show her, her worth? sometimes, those we love, lack confidence, and it becomes our responsiblity to show them because we are the ones who have mastery over words-to-pictures and pictures-to-words to make people see...

    and this is what i saw.....

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    Fred.

    this poem was about God....

    and i think that it was some scary how you described human reaction to loved ones.. i think that's how God should react to us.... this is what i was pleading thoughout the whole poem... for God to reveil His truth to us. because i think that there is something in my life that is keeping me in the dark.. possibly something that i dont want to face... who knows.... but anyways man you really got me thinking here i really owe you a big one.. thank you some much for taking the time to read me... i am much grateful.

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