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    And the last thing I had said was not goodbye.
    It was 'I' followed by 'wonder'.
    Then silence, here is this.
    I am unannounced, I have come to you quicker.
    I wonder now in your absence can you feel me?
    Ive stumbled to your thought unaware and
    not only have I met you this way,
    you have yet to see me.
    I wish not to exploit this gift,
    for it is granted to me so.
    God has sealed this on rebirth,
    therefore I will seek it.
    I will no longer be a nymph in passing.
    I know you are here, I shall leave
    this place and come to you.
    The womb revises me,
    I am here.
    Cotton wraps become of me,
    I thirst.
    My thoughts already with you
    though unattainable I miss you.
    60 years pass and death succumbed us,
    now reborn light sheds among thee.
    The blood of my blood,
    I love you.

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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Tamare, this is a lovely poem...very mystical and encouraging the imagination...toward reincarnation...if, when, why, how, who?

    I wonder now in your absence can you feel me?
    Ive stumbled to your thought unaware and
    not only have I met you this way,
    you have yet to see me.


    Love it!

    Nomad
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    Dear Tamare,

    LOVED LOVED LOVED this write. I look forward to reading your work as it always sends me in another realm. Beautifully written and executed.

    Kim :wub:

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    Thank you! So refreshing to know you feel me on this level! I am so honored to know you respect my writings as I do yours.


    Thank you

    Sincerely

    Tamare
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    A very interesting Poem. I do believe in reincarnation.... but I do not believe we know or are aware of being reincarnated. This would make a wonderful series if done with an answering soul hmm? One question though.... in line 23 at the end there .. do you mean thee?

    Mysty


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    Tamare,

    This was very interesting. Your portrayal of yourself and the one you are visiting. I personally hope to never have to be potty trained, have pimples and be a teenager again.

    Jerry

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    Oh for a soulmate Id do it a thousand times

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