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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    by me your reveered,
    I know it doesn't mean much,
    that one lonely guy has a love for you,
    When you swim in this sorrow,
    and abuse yourself,
    I hope to god I could be more help,

    Vanities a vice but to those that have none,
    its a weapon,

    When no one believes your pain,
    You cry out but to them its the same,
    and you can't even be hurt enough,

    your reveered by me,
    so much love I keep waiting for you,
    I'll make a way,
    not to just brighten your day,
    but to brighten your world,

    You and I can fill our empty needs,
    we can breath and bleed different
    than anybody,
    We can speak to each other like we're living in splendor,

    When you have nothing to turn too,
    remember, your reveered by me.

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    Erik:

    Let me the first to say, How utterly splendid you write. You bring the emotion right out into the front door and hit us square in the head.

    Your words are surreal and your romantic lines are outstretching it's arms for that special someone, who knows not yet how heartfelt you are.

    Keep writing dear friend. you touch our emotions in every poem you write.


    Blessings

    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Wow, deep

    And Sally is right, you do throw the emotions right out the front door.
    I really liked it, thanks for sharing

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Sally your comments make me feel so blessed,

    it is splendid just that i'm not writing to myself,

    Lee-ann thanks the front-door is always open lol
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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    FLATTERY IS NOT MY THING SO YU KNOW THIS HAS TO BE TRUE .. ONE POEM OF URE'S A DAY IS LIKE A A SHOT OF HEADY WINE AFTER A HARD DAYS WORK

    I love the kinda love that u are putting forward in this piece , the kinda love with pure intentions of healing all her wounds of bieng unloved ...the love of a well wisher in every sence of the word ..as always yu've outdone ureself ..LOVE THIS ..JONATHAN


    Posted By JONATHAN | May 28, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    dang Jonathan that big a compliment from you is really wonderful,
    and I know you don't need to tell me your an honest individual,
    one of the best friends a guy could meet and share poetry with,
    and you've been writing very well too
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Erik,

    This was an exceptional write. A love that is unconditional, and always there, no matter what. :wow: How awesome that would be to find such a deep love, that meanders in every capillary and every stream. This is you and I loved reading it, you are full of love Erik. Sorry, if that offends you, and I apologize in advance, I did not say it, or ask you to say it. At any rate, an awesome write indeed. Gave this an excellent rating.

    Kim

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    nothing wrong with being full of love,
    thanks for the rating,

    just for the shock of your day I love you Kim
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    I LOVE YOU TOO ERIK!!!!!!:bravo:

    Kim :)

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