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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by erikestabrook, Apr 8, 2007.



    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Do I last among your rainbow?
    Does the fall linger in my eyes?

    I've seen so many things stranger,
    though I've also seen less,

    I care with an elusion,
    that everything relates back,
    I don't mean to start confusion,
    but maybe humanities what you lack,

    I left my mind behind on a carousel,
    when it gets sick of this,
    I might insist that it could
    bring me the breakdown,

    shaking what it is that kept me so low,
    so unconceivable,

    that I can't follow the space between reality,
    your cares are kept and when you don't think I care,
    let me rewind and say,

    only lord and light could follow your pretty eyes,
    only hope and providence shine from your smile,

    Let me gather myself,
    for I need some help,
    if I spend my soul,
    will it stay this way?

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    My Dearest Erik,

    This was a delicate blend of love, hope, and self assurance on your part. I love the way the message reads to me. That in order to love the way you want and to to be felt, one must first love themselves and be self assured of their faith. What I have highlighted is especially heartfelt and beautiful. You really do write some lovely Emotional and Romantic Poetry Erik. Thank you for sharing this with us. Love Ya'!!

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}}:wub:

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    thanks Kim

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