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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    "Rhythm Of The Rainmaker"

    Head held high toward the south
    he cries aloud-
    Steady hands hold feathered wands
    his ritual tools.
    Painted face, deep eyes of brown
    like crying pools-
    Tom Toms pounding through the night
    excites the crowd.

    Shrilling wild winds, winds wildly west;
    clouds cloak the sun-
    Burning cold forbids the warmth
    no given chance.
    Freezing fires snuffed out by will
    hypnotic dance-
    Shouting wildly thunder crashes,
    rain has won.

    Read what's read from stories old,
    our history's plains-
    Ponder greatly on each page
    of life out west.
    Take the journey, feel the rhythm
    of the quest-
    Like the rainman who can summon
    in the rains.


    Sally aka Forestdawn

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    I do like your poetry Sally, it has such an elemental feel to it, I read this one over a few times, and was impressed with it each time. Keith(backstreetdreamer)

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    Your poem was music to my ears! VERY well done!


    Posted By lanaia74 | Oct 23, 2006
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    This was first rate, a great read with a small history lesson. well done!



    Paul


    Posted By Poetical | Oct 23, 2006
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. It's so great to be a part of this list.
    Rhythm of the Rainmaker was one of my favorites. I'm glad to have been able to share it

    Blessings
    Sally aka Forestdawn

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