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    lanaia74 New Member

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    I come to you on this bleak desolate night
    Swallowing my pride to say I'm sorry
    To make you understand how much I wish to hold you tight
    Begging you besseching you, please hear my plea.

    It seems so funny, I don't remember our quarrel
    Especially right afterwards, everything is a blank
    I know I was mad, but after that nothing seems real
    So be honest with me, please be totally frank.

    Help me understand, what just occurred
    I do know you were bitter and mad
    I think something bad happened or am I just being absurd?
    I think it was horrible, something really bad.

    Standing right in front of you! Don't you see me?
    Screaming at the top of my lungs, it's lie you don't hear me
    Look at me! Hear me! Until you do I will never let you be
    I'm begging you! Why won't you look at me?

    Now, I'm starting to remember and clearly see
    Our arguement was very intense, as bad as one can be
    I remember you striking me, then the gun you plainly made me see
    You Shot Me! I Am Dead! Now no one will ever hear my plea!


    Posted By lanaia74 | Feb 20, 2007
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    Yikes that was some squabble..

    ' could feel the need to be heard
    the need to comunicate.

    The fear was as loud as the pleaing
    in this write..

    Great.... very well done.

    Thanks for the read.


    Posted By Jeez | Feb 20, 2007
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