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    michael JPiC Contributor

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    This one comes from my experience's working in S.C.. One of the "Right to work States".


    Right to work state
    we will terminate
    your not in the loop
    and you will get the boot


    Right to work state
    and don't be hangin out late
    we will terminate if your four minutes late

    Right to work state
    where minimum wage
    is all the rage

    We right to work state's
    and you have no rights
    which we are bound to respect

    Right to work State
    We will terminate
    your not in the loop
    and you will get the boot


    Posted By michael | Jul 22, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    hmmm - There's some really bold commentary within this poem. Some I doubt the "Politicos" of the day would scarcely approach with vigor... Perhaps they would think that we'd want some answers for such hypocrisy...

    Anyway - no politics for me tonite :smilegrin: But truly MICHAEL - I enjoyed reading this poem. Kinda reminds me of how it was working for the United States Postal Service :yes:

    Seems like you give & give & give, then give a little bit more.... And it's not even appreciated, nonetheless respected. I can appreciate this write - Yeah!

    Thanx for sharing it

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 22, 2006
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    Very interesting piece here, Michael. A different genre if you will is very nice. It does go unappreciated, and if in the game, do we play or get out. If we play the game, yes, there are "underground politics" as I call it, that is questioned, accepted, and / or challenged. Very mind provoking! Thank you for sharing this piece with us Michael.

    Much Luv'...~*Kim*~ aka ~*Painted Diary*~

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