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    Romance under the Moonlight
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    We kissed under the moonlight of the rose garden
    On this fragrant, velvety onyx night
    Her ruby-red lips are as soft as rose petals
    In that misty glaze of the mystifying light
    ~
    Was it the brilliance of the stars' reflection
    That I seen in her sultry sable eyes
    Ah no, it was the light of love shining
    The kind of love that lives on for eternity
    ~
    As we strolled hand-in-hand among the roses
    So long ago, on a night just like this
    I lost my heart to her for eternity
    With the our magical first kiss....


    Posted By Bear | May 17, 2008
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    Lovely, very good imagery used in this one. Good work

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    Thank you again for another wonderful comment Deep__poet
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | May 20, 2008
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