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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Rose
    petals
    fallen perfumed
    velvety
    love

    Rose
    symbols
    of sweet caress
    hearts
    moved

    Roses
    yellow
    sunshine friendships
    thorns removed
    gathered in
    peace

    Rose
    dewdrops
    delicately alighted
    cleansing
    pure

    Roses
    black
    dried pain
    devoid of feeling
    life's winter
    come
    too soon!


    nomadicrhymer

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I don't say this often but Beautiful,
    lovely I do say, great word-play,
    for a rose in winter must have bleed many thumbs,
    for a rose in winter is what you are if your beautifull and unloved
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Ms T,

    :wow: This is some beautiful poesy here!!I love everything about this poem. It is going into my favorites right now, and is receiving a 5 PD rating!!!The words selected, the execution was spot on, and aesthetically, it is beautiful as well. Nice Masterpiece Therese!!!! Thank you for sharing!!:hooray::bravo::)

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}}
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Wow, Erik..Thank YOU! for those lovely poetic words. I appreciate the read and the comments, aways...

    Queen Painted! :birthday1: thank you for such an HONOR!! ooohhh that is SO nice of you! I feel so special...my first 5 rating.... ! TOO COOL!! :sign_thanks:

    to my fans - I'd like to say thank you for never giving up on me,...uhoh, I blanked for a minute there - thought it was the OSCARS!! :monkey-lmao:

    Nomad :party-drinks:

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    This is a stunning work, Nomadic type poetess lady mother! I read this one three times and kept finding more...very professionally done work, Muse.


    Posted By Benny | Mar 4, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thank you, thank you, thank you, Benny! I love roses, and their smell, and the velvet delicate buds...and I am actually surprised that this is my first rose poem....I appreciate the sentiments!

    Nomad

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