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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Pigasus, Oct 31, 2006.



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    Sammy


    Sammy was a sleepyhead.
    He lived inside a dream.
    “Out there, I’m on the bank.” he said,
    “In here, I am the stream.”


    ~ ~ ~

    The dreams we hold behind our eyes
    reveal within their own disguise,
    new galaxies in other skies
    surrounding us each day,

    As wonder soars on wings of light,
    whose feathers form themselves in flight,
    from bits and pieces of the night
    we've gathered on our way.

    The songs we sing while on the wing
    are waters rushing from the Spring
    to germinate our souls and bring
    us comfort when we stray.

    ~ ~ ~

    Sammy saw the songs he heard
    as blossoms in his mind.
    And Sammy sang just like a bird,
    for Sammy…

    …he was blind.




    ~ Will Morris ~


    Posted By Pigasus | Oct 31, 2006
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    VERY original and creative! Well done!


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 1, 2006
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    This was a real joy to read!
    Not only does it have a great rhythm, perfect rhymes, and wonderful imagery, it is written with obvious technical skill AND it is visually pleasing as well!
    More, please!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 31, 2006
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