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    Saxophone Love I

    Friday night was Jazz Night
    at the Blue Bongo Club
    down on 57th Street

    He started blowin' bout'
    three Fridays ago, and
    his presence alone would
    give one pause.

    Me and the girls went
    eve'ry Friday night, but
    that Friday was different

    Between deep Tenor breaths,
    he looked at me,
    like I belonged to him

    After the gig was over,
    he asked me to stay

    He seemed to know that
    I wanted to feel the
    stiffness of his brass___horn

    Alone, we talked, we danced
    then he pulled out his______brass
    it felt so good in my hands

    Cool, erect, and smooth
    to my touch, he titillated me
    oh so gently

    I tasted and in and out
    and out and in
    my mouth moistened for more

    He threw his head back
    to partake of my...
    performance and smiled

    When done
    we both agreed
    I needed to take...
    Saxophone Lessons


    Copyright April 2007 Kimberly D. Robinson


    More of the Series can be viewed via the link below, and enjoy!

    http://jpicforum.info/final-edit/saxophone-love-series-parts-v-vi-vii-viii-ix-x-2419.html

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    Ha ha ha :p Scandelous. I like it. I especially like how its not too long, but still gets the point across. ^.^
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    Dear CW,

    Thank you for taking time to read and comment. Am glad you like it, and not too long!

    Uhhhh....Scandalous is my middle name......however, this series is not as scandalous as my Scandalous Senryu Series....hehehehehehe.

    Thank you again CW, and tis very nice to have you with JPiC!!!!:curtsey:

    {{{~~**PAINTED**~~}}};)2
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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    :whip: kinda slutty in a nice way ... mmmm kinky


    Posted By JONATHAN | Apr 9, 2007
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    Good grief, PD!
    You've been hangin out with Jeez - I can tell! LOL!
    Ah well, if Jeez's influence results in poetry like this - then I think
    I had better go visit that lady more often, myself!
    This is one FANTABULOUS write, Sis!
    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Apr 10, 2007
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    :eek:k2: :wow: :sax: :wow: :smokin:

    Ahhhhhhhhhhh... you got it Babe...

    Dah dah.. Dah dah.. Dah dah...

    You had us all involved right
    to the... end.

    Our minds were there in the...

    GUTTER...

    until you straightened us

    out... !!!!

    GREAT... work... Kim...

    Now who needs to provide
    the towels????

    And provide a heads up
    on the posting........ LOL.

    :heat: :eek:k2: :heat:

    :flyaway: You had us :flyaway:


    Posted By Jeez | Apr 10, 2007
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    :roflmao: Jeez and Tree. Thank you so much for taking precious time to read and to comment. Please view the series as well. I have 3 more to go, then done!!!!!!!!!!!! :flyaway:

    {{{~~**PD**~~}}}:blush:
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Thank you Jonathan, hehehehe, like that comment! Thanks for taking time to read and comment!

    {{{~~**PAINTED**~~}}};)
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    Hey Ms Tree,

    Hehehehehe, loved the comment! Thank you for taking time to read and comment! We have one more seat on the bus! LOLOL Thanks Sis!!

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    AhhhhhMy Dearest Jeez,

    I am so pleased you liked it. Thanks for taking time to read and comment!! I wanted the shock effect, and did not know I really had it until the end!!! Towels? I will have one of my guys get them from your guys! LOLOLOL Shame on us for having our minds in the gutter! LOO! Do it all again, to!!!!! LOLOLOL!!!

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}};)2
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Kim, this was really, really, really titillating...to say the least!! You do know how to tease the palate and skim by the hot burning fire without actually touching it and getting burnt...if you get my drift.

    Awesome!!!

    Nomad

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    :clapping: LOL... When???? ;)


    Posted By Jeez | Apr 11, 2007
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    Now we have to wait for Mysty!!!! LOL Jeez, thanks.

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}}:)

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