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    Saxophone Love Series Parts (V, VI, VII, VIII, IX and X)

    I plan to finish the Series, and do paintings to compliment the poems in Sepia Ink, and a light wash, for that beautiful, antique, and rustic feel. In mind at the moment, is to try to capture on canvas the "Soul" , or "Spirit", of the Saxophone, if you will. I plan to post Saxophone Love I through IV shortly. Enjoy!

    Saxophone Love V

    His mouth fills up with thoughts of me
    reminiscing as if my thighs were joined with jazz
    till he belts an oh so long
    smooth sound from his saxophone.

    He blows down the ride of my breasts
    up the arch of my spine
    into the crest of my thighs.

    When the song is over
    he licks his lips oh so sweetly
    to get a second wind...
    to play me again.


    Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson



    Saxophone Love VI

    His rhythm, reminiscent
    of a Jamaican jazz serenade
    paralyzes me.

    I cannot resist his melody
    No! I don't want to stop.

    He pushes his brass horn in my ___ face
    releasing sweet sensual notes
    at a time.

    I can't help being captivated
    till I scream, till I chime.

    This cannot be the last song
    I wanted him to play another melody…

    …harder
    .… faster
    ….stronger.

    I want to feast on his brass
    all night long
    till I'm covered ___with his Jazz
    yeah.


    Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson



    Saxophone Love VII

    Moistened my lips to reciprocate his melody
    took his brass horn in my hands
    and began to____ blow ____ gently
    till he no longer could resist my invitation to
    compose a duet ___ privately.

    We waxed and waned like the painted moon,
    we ebbed and flowed with exquisite
    harmony like the tides of the Nile
    till his precious jazz replenished my bayou
    one note at a time.


    Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson



    Saxophone Love VIII

    Opened my window
    sounds of the night float in
    a misty cool zephyr
    arousing my peanut butter skin.

    A silhouette
    my beautiful Moroccan man
    divinely reclining,
    fingers gently caressing his
    ebony brass sax.

    Mouth moistens delicate tones
    blowing sweet air with tremble
    stroke every note of me.

    I cannot resist.

    I want more.

    I taste every C-clef; the tenor
    aged like my collection of fine wine
    fermented from sweet Pinar del Rio vines,
    pulls me up slowly
    improvising jazz between my thighs.

    Afterward, a misty cool zephyr
    tickles my dampened peanut butter skin
    as we lay in each other’s arms
    listening to the sounds
    of the night float in.


    Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson

    Saxophone Love IX - Cinquain

    Sweet wind
    exhales from brass
    notes dance la reverie
    flesh pulsating, as I murmur
    his name.

    Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson



    Saxophone Love X

    Dress poured over my curves
    ebbs and flows with la musica
    my eyes closed
    my skin, moist
    my hips
    meandering freely

    Suddenly, I hear echoes
    clock strikes midnight
    room now filled
    with a tenor soliloquy
    prearranged for two
    amber wind fades
    into silence

    Shadows
    of this midnight rendezvous
    reveal a smooth, shiny,
    erect, and ready…
    saxophone

    Touching me there
    on my slightly wet__lips
    I accept the invitation
    as I slumber deep

    Mouthpiece
    to my glossed lips
    I blow softly
    tasting him

    He plays one more
    libidinous time
    note after note
    indeed we entwine
    to a rhythmic
    symphony sublime

    Oh…how I love the Saxophone

    Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson

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    PD, I am in awe... :omg:

    Your work is exquisite and your use of metaphor in this erotic union of love and lust is stupendous! I am a loss for words in the way you weave such rich imagery into subtle innuendo, teasing and coaxing a little at a time.
    :welldone:

    Brava, brava, brava sweet poet, your words are like spun gold!
    more...more :fan1:
    *whew*

    hugs,
    sage:thumbsup: :clapping:


    Posted By sage | Dec 10, 2006
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    Dear Sage,

    LOL!!!!!!!!!! I am so thrilled you took precious time to read and comment on the series. Thank you sooo much!!!! I tried to depict "CLASSY" sexy, and not "RAUNCHY" sexy in these poems. I also wanted the reader to imagine what they wanted in the pieces. I did use some tricks in writing about the sax, lol. Ok, I will admit :girlhide:, I wanted to get my audience alittle worked up :blush:, LOL!!!!!! I have another poem called "My Piano", that I think you would enjoy as well. I plan to have an Art / Poetry show in the latter part of next year, called "Painted Words" by Painted Diary featuring "The Saxophone Love Series". As I have stated prior, I am in awe of your work, and humbled by your reply. Much Luv....Hugs :huggles:

    ~*Painted*~ ;)

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    ok i need to go to memphis and then get laid. i may have to limp though...seems i have a cramp that won't go away.


    Posted By zaac | Dec 10, 2006
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    well PD, you accomplished what you set out to do; these poems are classy, yet with enough innuendo to get you thinking and visualizing...you are a talent my friend, very much so! You are a pleasure to read!:scores:

    hugs,
    sage
    :rocking: :sign_different: :fan1: :kiss:


    Posted By sage | Dec 10, 2006
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    I agree this is great work, love it :bravo: :peace:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 11, 2006
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    This is a poem which challenges imagination , an excellent exhibition of skill and metaphors , it is symbolic in so many ways, the poem reflects an element of self esteem which exudes calmness ,very well done , smooth flow and generous emotion i love it

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    As Alwayz- Big fan of this series.....:blush2:

    V3


    Posted By v3sista | Dec 11, 2006
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    :goodpost: :sax: :scores: :blush: :whistle3: :word_thankyou:


    Posted By Jeez | Dec 11, 2006
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    as sensuous as jazz can get.....makes you want to take up the sexoph...er..saxophone, and play. Do you have any plans for writing a series on the guitar...?:welldone:


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    Thank you Zaac (You are so bad!!, lol) , Echoes, Sage, Ms V, Jeez, Lord (thank you so much), and Zvi ( thank you so much and guitar aye?...hmmmm...I will write one for you, just tell me what kind of guitar)) all for your warm comments.

    Painted ;)

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    PaintedDiary, Sax series

    I came, I saw but I was conquered..........
    it took me on a journey, I moved with it
    I succumbed........ I had to take a cold shower.
    Really, I loved it.
    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Dec 12, 2006
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    Gawd...I'm drippin wet! It sure is hot in here, in a very nice way...Erotic and visual...an ode to the music of love...and the Sax...could not have been better written! Wow, PD...just wow.


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    Hold on Benny...I got a towel!!!! LOL!!!!!! Thank you for precious taking time to read and comment. Thank you also for your...steamy comments, LOL!! Seriously, I am humbled to have my series well received by someone of your caliber. Machos Gracias. Take Care.

    ~*Painted*~ :artist:
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    Beautiful, Sensual...whew...I loved the read, the flow of the words great writing PD...Hugs:shots:(guess, I'll go find a hunk now, a go to the table of Love...... :scores:
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    Dear Ron and Twinks,

    For taking precious time to read and comment on this series. I am thankful to be able to count on my friends in this community for support. This series, as I have stated will be the one I plan on exhibiting in my art / poetry show, so the comments are well appreciated!! Take Care!!!!

    ~*Painted~ ;)
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    yeah- yeah- yeah

    these have turned out muy fabuloso mana... i've read them as individual bodies of labor, but to see them together was a real treat. sooooo much sensualism & erotica masked within the context of an instrument. nearly had an orgasim myself...lol... can't keep people waiting on the other ten. lookin' out. one-
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    Dear Ariono,

    :girlhide:about the orgasm!! LOL!!! Glad I could bring it on! LOL!!! Thank you Ariono for being there from the beginning, you and Ms Jacquii. Both of you helped me by critiquing at its best, and the end product is a labor for all to enjoy...and / or have an orgasm! LOL!!! I will keep you posted about the rest of the series and the paintings! Much Love.

    ~*Kimberly*~ ;)
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    Thank you all for supporting me in my "genre" or my "la musica erotica" as I like to call it. This series has been fun to scribe, and the comments were even more beautiful....ok and sizzling!!!!! LOL!! I added Saxophone Love IX and X, and will share the beginning pieces soon. Love you all, thank you!!

    {{{~~**Painted~~**}}
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    I can't even say how TOTALLY AWESOME AND BEAUTIFUL this is! Painted, this is BY FAR my very favorite series of both 2006 and 2007! and 2007 just started...unbelievably sexy and classy and SOOO steamy! It takes you on a meandering mental journey of music and physical love, so meshed and melded...well, all I can say is that I will never look at musical instruments the same way...good thing I sold my son's high school band sax!! heehee

    luv
    Nomad

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