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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by ronbliss, Jun 22, 2007.



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    Secret Lover

    I have a secret lover,
    Who is good beyond compare,
    She takes me to great depths in love,
    And teaches me to care,

    I have a secret lover,
    Who is great to all extremes,
    A kind and skillful lover,
    She fulfills one’s wildest dreams.

    A lover one can count on,
    To be there in times of need,
    Who puts me first, in each and every,
    Action, thought and deed.

    My secret lover’s always there,
    Unless, I should digress,
    For in my least digression,
    She’s not there, I must confess,

    I have a secret lover, who,
    Will be here in the end,
    One solitary lover, she will,
    Be my lifelong friend.

    My lover’s charms, unique as such,
    My mind, my soul, aspire,
    To join her in love’s ecstasy,
    She’ll set my heart afire,

    She gives me joy, that I’ve not known,
    And will not know again,
    My lover lives within my heart,
    Forever to remain.

    I have a secret lover and,
    I am her only quest,
    She said lest I surrender,
    She will never, ever rest.

    I have a secret lover that,
    No one will ever find,
    My lover is not visible,
    Except for in my mind.


    Posted By ronbliss | Jun 22, 2007
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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Ron,

    This is wonderful writing my friend. And I truly understand this scenario, you'll find this allusion in what I write as well. My Fav:

    :clapping:

    Jerry

    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Jerry,

    I had a lot of fun writing this one and was not certain how I intended to finish it until I arrived at the final verse. Thank you for reading and responding.

    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Jun 22, 2007
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    great write, enjoyed the read:bass:


    Posted By Echoes | Jun 25, 2007
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    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Lisa,

    Thank you for reading Secret Lover. I appreciate your kind words.

    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Jun 25, 2007
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    ahh Ron..... we live for the fantasies in our minds hmm? Awesome write.


    Posted By Mysty | Aug 5, 2007
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    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Mysty,
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment..........Fantasies of the mind are a great deal of what I write....... often when it sounds believable and real, it is still a fantasy.......... That is my world. Again, thanks........
    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Aug 5, 2007
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    i love it!!! thank you for sharing it.


    Posted By seobeglobal | Aug 5, 2007
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