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    "This is a
    collaboration between
    Bear, Altree94 and Jeez."


    As we declare our secret passions,
    silent sensual desires,
    we look into each other’s soul,
    and feel the heat ignite our bodies fires.
    Sultry desires, eternal sensitivity.
    Eyes filled with ecstasy,
    we gaze into the depths
    of our affections and seduction.
    Demonstrating our lustful images in silence,
    satisfying every beat of our fiery passions,
    I embrace their fiery flesh within my grasp.


    One on each side with me between the two,
    the embers of passion ignite.
    What once was merely fantasy,
    is now reality for three of us this night.
    Together we learn each other's desires and needs.
    From pleasure's indrawn breath
    and from each silken touch,
    we learn to give and yet receive so much.
    Imagination unbound with sighs of satisfaction,
    soft moans of painful pleasure, our sensual desires
    sear a burning, passionate memory within.


    Lustfully and with care we braid our passions,
    into a plunder of our scents, desires and heats.
    Clenching, positioning, moving with a mission,
    kneeling to the craving curves.
    Heavy madness envelopes our sensual dependence,
    embracing our thirsts.
    Rampant...ly.
    Pumping hearts, running of minds as we dive,
    longingly into the nectar of our needs.
    End to end with her in centered, giving with,
    zeal and totally
    unrestrained.


    Posted By Jeez | Apr 30, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Altree and Jeez for the honor of writing with you both we did a magnificent penning
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 30, 2007
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    Intricate soul intricate soul

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    should I dare?

    Lustfully and with care we braid our passions,
    into a plunder of our scents, desires and heats.
    Clenching, positioning, moving with a mission,
    kneeling to the craving curves.
    Heavy madness envelopes our sensual dependence,
    embracing our thirsts.
    Rampant...ly.



    Should anyone comment... ah-hem!! There seems to be something stuck in my mind there.
    I think I can die in peace now. Merci

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    Thank you IS, for your comments!

    Many, many THANKS to Bear and Jeez for letting me join them!

    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Apr 30, 2007
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    IS

    thank you so much
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Apr 30, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    wait....three people....having?
    oh geez.
    lost, so lost.
    it's cool...
    but i'm gonna take the other route and say this is about you three making poetry together...not the first one i was think about....

    Jeez Banned

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    Thanks yous two...
    Bear and Altree,

    This was great and
    really enjoyed the
    experience.

    It's nice yous asked
    me to join in on your
    write.

    Again Thanks.


    Posted By Jeez | Apr 30, 2007
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    Very nice write you three, and I enjoyed the feelings very much. You three write beautifully together.

    {{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}
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    Hmmm...who wrote what, I wonder?! It all comes together perfectly as if written by one person, so, in essence, the three of you did a wonderful job! :friends:

    Jeez are you passing out all those towels you've been collecting over the last couple weeks?

    Nomad :serenade:

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    Thank you Painted and nomad for the great comments
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 30, 2007
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    Jeez Banned

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    :thanx:

    IS... Ah... your eyes capture everything. ;)

    Mango... Those first thoughts are the most revealing.:)

    Kim... Glad you got into the poems feel, and thanks for the compliment.:flyaway:

    Nomad... enjoyed your encourageing comments, ha ha ... used all the towels :chuckle2:



    Ms Tree and Bear... This was great learning something new with yous
    thanks for this experience.:campfire:


    Posted By Jeez | May 1, 2007
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    Indeed a great write and I smoked a cigarette when i finished reading it!
    I snap in applause fore you 3 took your time to capture what each other expressed and that made it worth the read!


    Posted By FTD4KiNG | May 8, 2007
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    Jeez Banned

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    FTD4KiNG,

    Thanks for your
    very Descriptive
    encounter with
    this write.

    And for your very
    encourageing
    words:

    Again Thanks. :bravo:


    Posted By Jeez | May 8, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thanks for the great comment
    handshakes
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | May 8, 2007
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    Truly a poetically seductive piece. I came back to read again, and love it even more! Great collab again you three! Loved it!!!!:bravothanx:

    ~~~~KIM~~~~:<(@

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    Thank you again Painted I am so happy you love my poems
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | May 9, 2007
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    Jeez Banned

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    Thanks Ms Kim,

    Just wait till Ms Tree
    gets back to see, all
    the nice reviews on
    this write.

    Glad you came in to
    read it again.;)2


    :thanx:


    Posted By Jeez | May 9, 2007
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    Well, I'm back and YOU are so right Jeez!
    It certainly IS wonderful to come back to comments like these!
    I showed this poem to a friend of mine and he knew right away which part was mine.
    He said, "It figures that YOU would be in the middle!" LOL!
    Now I'm wondering just what he meant by that.

    :thankyou:

    All of the comments are very much appreciated, everyone!

    -Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | May 20, 2007
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    !


    Posted By Jeez | May 21, 2007
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