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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Lily1111, Apr 30, 2008.



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    lifting sleepy heads through rich black soil
    emerging seedlings awaken
    turning faces to the sun
    embraced by morning light
    dripping with cool dew
    impatiently
    infused hope
    begins
    life


    Posted By Lily1111 | Apr 30, 2008
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    Beautiful Nonet with perfect form too.
    Really enjoyed this and will read again.
    Excellent job!


    Posted By Moonchild | May 2, 2008
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    Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I truly appreciate them.


    Posted By Lily1111 | May 2, 2008
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    Lovely,
    I can picture a garden about which one cares deeply.


    Posted By JolieH | May 2, 2008
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    Thanks for your lovely comment.


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    Very nice and it's a good parallel to a person getting up in the morning to start their day.

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    Well thank you so much. I really appreciate that you took the time to read the poem. I hadn't thought about the similarity of getting up to start your day, but you are right.


    Posted By Lily1111 | May 5, 2008
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