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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Poem inspired by http://jpicforum.info/creativity-ou...vity-17-personification-challenge-5011-2.html
    Try it - it's a wonderful writing exercise :D

    Jacquii.


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    Short Blueblack Stain

    stained. stained am i. motionless
    as the antarctic dripping sickles of motionless water. frozen
    in time where there's nothing but heartachen momentum.
    i cry myself to sleep in daytime hours.

    blue. blue am i. an icesickle of sorts; you can call
    me a stalactite.

    on the heir of notoriety i sit
    collecting dust like vampiric must; i'm like guano
    in the dewy dawn of morning:
    shit of the ages, only rock
    solid and dispensable like wetness.

    ha. i'm almost liquid
    if you look closely and relate like yesteryear.

    do you know Me?



    Copyright © 2007 Jacquii Cooke


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 11, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    I am speechless....just :wow: When I grow up I want to write like you...lol...:girllove:
    Ms Jacquii this is profoundly intricate woven with geometric pearls. Love it!

    Kim :)
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ms J... Outstanding!!!

    Just Outstanding work. I agree totally with Kim.

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    Posted By Mysty | Dec 19, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    I thank you LADIES so much for commenting my lonely poem.
    I thought I'd give a nother try towards the writing exercises, as I know I've been a little incogNegro :blush2:

    I hope you both appreciated my "HA!" moment
    this poem is one of my personal favorites of my own LOL
    I sort of like the "shit of ages" and "stalactite" lines if I do say so meself.

    Appreciates the poetic LOVE My Dahlinks ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 19, 2007
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    LOVING the word "stalactite"...:yay:...lol

    KIm ;)
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    haha - well when I was a.... erm in.... "scouting" - I did my fair share of spelunking.... Well I never was a scout - I was actually a Y-Trail Blazer :LOL: truly..... But anyway - I suppose I could go in to a diatribe about the distinctions between stalactites and stalagmites :lol: ---- Don't even get me started MS KIM :p

    JAcquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 19, 2007
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    A pearl worth reading! If I ever grow up...I want YOU to be the one who kicks my XXX! LOL...what a great work, MsJ! Love it.


    Posted By Benny | Dec 22, 2007
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